some one the commenters below me need to realize that the long sentence in the exposition is NOT a run-on sentence. a run a sentence is a sentence that combines dependent and independent clauses without proper
punctuation between them.however, the writer used semi-colons and commas appropriately, so it is completely grammatical. the sentence is just long, that’s all.good story by the way, but the climax was very vague. it created a lot of excitement that just led of to a quick ending, like you finished it in a hurry.VA:F [162]91_11.9.(from 0 votes)